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Jaide_d
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All my Poetry

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Alright well instead of having a million different poetry topics, I figured I'd cut you all the pain of having to scroll forever and just stick it all in one!

Any suggestions, critisism and any other synonym for comments are welcome.
Here I go.

Oh and if anyone wishes to view any of my poetry, go to my Deviantart: http://jaiided.deviantart.com/
There's a bunch of photography in there too, if you want to check it out.
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Manipulation

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Silver thin, sharp, curved to a point
Ready to be used right
Fits so readily in my palm, begging
"I promise to be light."
Do not speak, gentle blade for your words are manipulative.
"Oh but you know my motive well,
Follow me, follow me,
Follow me to hell."
Hell is far, but let's pursue
Tell me the way,
For you're one of few.
"Get dressed now, we'll go for a walk
Before the hour of twelve strikes clock."
The silver man whispers to my ear,
"The path to the dock, near the pier.
Step out on the dock, no worry at all,
Against the world, we can stand tall!
Now take my hand and lift me to shoulders,
This will be quick, all pain will be smouldered."
Into the water his body fell;
Another victim, a new story to tell.
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Bullet to the Mind

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My agony brings pleasure to your life
Entwined by birth, separated by hand.
Your laugh echoes around me
Mouth twists to a grim mutation;
Dark humour haunts your face.
And the madness burning in your eyes
Dance when I'm in pain.
A bullet shoots from your heart to mouth
And peirces my mind, harrowed by insult:
The "*bleep* *bleep*" not worth a breath.
You bring home your silent pleasures every night
Tonight is the night to destroy them.
My own bare hands shall defeat the devil
Of whom possesses you night through night.
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Guilt in the Dark

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Laugh at the sun
And cry to the moon
For these tears are seen only in darkness.
A lie in the light
Exposed in the night
When I release my harness.
My eyes squeeze shut tight
And I hope for black dreams
It is there my guilt hollows.
Every word of lie floods back
An archive of truth I lack
My eyes open to day and all fault is swallowed.
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Atmosphere of Demise

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The world alternates to greyscale
And the clouds overcome sun.
Time to speak for those too weak
Who lives in the minds of the shunned.
Tears of the poverty the clouds have seen
Are showers from heartbreaking towns.
Screaming for sustenance, for water, for life;
For the time, the world breaks down.
A cascade of tears are brought to all,
An atmosphere of demise.
To spread their grey lament
The veil is lifted to sail, spread outcries.
Shadowing a new land, black clouds of sorrow
Like a velvety cloth, drop over the blue.
To tell the tales of the land far off,
To those who never knew.
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Diagnosis

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An apple a day
Keeps the doctor away
But it's the doctor, by visit, we pay.
Shower us in diagnosis
Grant us with the will of sclerosis,
Dead on the floor induced by narcosis.
Everyone's ridden with the illness
Addicted to the pills that make you feel this
Until all succumbed into the stillness.
Do not drum yourself the medical way.
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The Eyes

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Oh, those eyes race past me
Day through day, by twos.
Coal burns below the retina
To the core of the soul.
Mouth melts like wax
Bringing eyes to a hollow,
Eyes wringing
For the neck of my possession.
My mouth lacks the tongue
And my eyes dare not touch.
Boring a hole through my heart
It's speeding up to keep dancing;
Those eyes take all defiance.
I lower my head, give in to the singe
Turn my brim against the street.
The mantle burns scarlet on my cheeks,
Not today.
Those eyes of old men, new men
Thrust in my direction
Peirce to kill, and not a grievance.
Screaming for sanity, scream for immunity!
Death for the right
And the blood drops like needles.
The eyes gouge and writhe in pain
Widen and close, pupils retract
My eyes feed hungrily.
Absorbing all color, flushed to grey.
This is the day, this is my day.
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Zombie's Rye

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Trudge as a zombie,
Pursuing a succulent heart.
Not a staggering soul can stop me
From gaining what I did part.

A scent of death overwhelms
And I hunt like a wolf on a sheep.
A beast of another realm;
Crimson blood: mine to reap.

Savagely ripping the innocent
Not a limb left to spare.
Those days of sheer magnificence
Are those of no repair.

Time is standing still.
Kill to live; live to kill.
I have become a monster and you must forgive,
I am doing this against my own will.

The bite that infects like a plague
Seeping to the marrows of the bone.
Engraving you like a dog tag,
Destined to eternally roam.

The victim is not you, but me,
For you shall die quickly.
Suffer and try as I might to flee,
Every day I shall grow more sickly.

Seeing nothing but rotting corpses,
Lingering smells of blood in the sky.
Ripping the neck so the blood forces;
Take a sip of a zombie's rye.

Trudge as a zombie,
Pursuing a succulent heart.
Not a staggering soul can stop me
From gaining what I did part.
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Goodbye, Goodbye.

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I walk this street of hopeless dreams
It's not as bad as homeless seems.
Another hit will numb the pain
I steal from others, an easy gain.
Dumpsters are my main nutrition
I take what I can with no precision.
Eyes follow my every footfall;
Their glares damned me when I stood tall.
The cold of winter hits harder everyday
The unbearable heat of summer makes me hate every ray.
Too much time has gone by with no food to hit home
No matter how hard I look or how far I roam.
My last heartbeats are few, I know,
For my mind is lost and my pulse is low.
Goodbye sweet world that never did love me,
Goodbye, goodbye, for I am now free.
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Mon Cherie

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The sweet smells,
Mon cherie,
Are stained in my memory.
I selfishly breathe it all in
The aroma filling me like a cup of tea
And I drink it thirstily.
I linger in reverie.

The strong embrace,
Mon cherie,
Feels like it will never end.
Your arms remain around me
Not a stitch left to mend.
If I fight, you will defend.
Our love cannot be a dead end.

The bewildering sight,
Mon cherie,
My eyes dwell on you
And my heart does a double take.
I'm a languishing fool.
I reveal myself to few
And you listen when I do.

The delightful memories,
Mon cherie,
Are those to hold close.
Every step, I see your face
Our affection grows
We are the stem of the red rose.
My joviality shows.
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Silence Behind the Music

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The darkness closes in,
All the sound fades away.
Not a whisper said,
Slide the headphones on; press play.
Retreat to my haven,
Hide behind the door
Separating reverie and reality.
Side-step the rivalry.
Come lay beside me.
Waves of comfort wash over
Consumed by luxury
Relinquish all worry.
Slip into the silence.
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Disappeared

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I fall back into your arms
They melt away before me.
Your silhouette haunts my mind,
My dreams,
I worry.
I feel I lost you long ago
The blame is all my own.
I'm sorry I am no better
Not up to your standards,
If only I'd have known.
I have buried myself too deep
And it's just as I've always feared.
Love can't be turned around,
Reversed.
It seems you've disappeared.
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Confessions of a Victim

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You think you're just
You think I'm futile.
Scars of ruthless affliction
Masked by a smile.

Every livid night
i watch you throw yourself away.
Keeping clear of the path of destruction,
But failing with dismay.

Only the strongest stand to fight,
But even the strongest succumb.
The ceaseless battle persists;
The constant quarrels numb.

The remnants of a young amity
Never to be rectified.
Until you change, until you see.
Until you learn, until you are me.
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The King's Cry

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The lion stands strong
With a flicker of humour in the eye.
The all-mighty roar,
The kind of the jungles' cry.

He, the other,
Thought he could purge.
Soon to discover
What intelligence it surged.

A fight to the death
Seemed only fitting.
One must murder:
One must be victim.

Sinking jaws in deep,
Victory overshadowing all.
The crown: his to keep.
Standing strong, standing tall.
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Re: All my Poetry

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Very nice poems Jaide_d. I certainly hope you are considering a career in writing of some form, I think you'll go far!

Cheers!
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